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Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Blog Post # 8 Ch. 11 and 12

Final Awakening

Ralph's Journal:

I wake up to a cold breeze, I look around to seek a cold fire of black ashes.  I awake to a crying Piggy. He sobs as he speaks of his stolen glasses.  Tears roll down his face and role off his chin. I look at him in sorrow, and decide to call a meeting. I grabbed the light butterscotch cream conch shell and blow into it, I call for my tribe. The boys scurried to the soft sanded beach and stood in my presents. I tell the boys. Now everyone, there is only one thing we can do right now, Piggy can't see with ought his glasses so we have to go get them specs back. 
The boys stared at me and said, " We are ready Ralph." 
I safely led my tribe into the forest and carefully pulled Piggy along. 
We passed through the vines and the ruffled dirt of the forest an finally got to Jacks side of camp called Castle Rock. As we start to walk towards the sight to boys from Jacks camp approached us. Jacks so called guards.
Hack walks over to see me and his guards talking ad he watches his hunters dragged their dead pig. 
He jumps down off the rocks and takes out a spear. I take out my spear and we battle. I swung from the side and he pecked my leg with his spear. I swung side of Jacks left and caught his cheek and ear. As I bring back my spear, we are interrupted by Piggy who takes out the conch and holds it in the air. He yells out, " I've got the conch, so listen up!" 
Jacks tribe is in silence and then spits out in laughter. They laugh.
Still laughing Piggy tries to get their attention again. " I've got the conch, I've got the conch!"
Piggy struggles to speak. 
I hear a noise from the top of the Castle Rock mountain. I look up and before I know it the giant boulder beside Roger has now crushed Piggy.
"Noooooo!!!"
The giant boulder lands tumbling onto the ground crushing the shells to pieces and all left of the shell is powder of white and a little bit of butterscotch gold. 
Piggy has gone off into the ocean. I look over the mountain to see Piggy being swept away by the ocean in one blink. The bloody water sways and the air stays still, and he did it truculently.
With Eric and Sam captured and Piggy gone, and then there is Jacks group who all are holding spear, I was scared and dashed off into the forest.  

I hide in the forest from the hunters chasing after me, as I hear there hunting call as the boys ululation until they got to the end of the island. I ran deeper into the forest knowing they were near. I see there plan is to get in a cordon till they finally trap me. I find myself trapped at the end of the island and decide to hide myself. I thought of myself as a Pig hiding. I hide in a dark little den and the hunters pass me, as the search carefully. Then a boy from the tribe looks straight into my eyes trying to look through the smoke of the fire on the island. He calls out for the others and I get up and dash to the sandy hot sand on the beach. I trip on a pile of dry hot sand of the beach and fell upon shiny black boots. I look up at the army pants up to his shoulders covered in epaulettes and then my eyes lead to his face. The face of an actual adult that I have seen so long ago. I stare at his face and tears swerve down my face as I sob, I can hear the boys from Jacks tribe and they all scream and go into silence and come to a cessation to see the men along the beach. The last words that ever crossed me from that day were, "What is going on here." That's what saved me that day. 

Thursday, October 2, 2008

Blog Post # 7 Ch: 9 and 10

Great Chief served Royal
Jacks Journal:


It is light out side  with clouds move around faster than ever.  My tribe and I walk from out of the cool forest to invite everyone from Ralph's side of the camp to join my camp instead of Ralph's. As my group and I make the transition of the soft prickly wet grass to the cool and warm mixed  sand that mixed in between my toes. My group and I walked over to Ralph and Piggy and everyone else in there camp. 
" What do you want?" said Piggy
"Well we are here to invite anyone who wanted to come to my camp." " You can join when ever  you want."
Piggy and Ralph look at each other and gave each other a look. They looked back at me and were quiet. I whispered "now". 
The two hunters from my camp yelled out, " The chief has spoken."Just as we planned.
It felt so nice that I was finally chief, though Ralph was the real chief I was chief of my camp. I smirked as they both looked at me as if I was crazy. 
"Lets go." I yelled out. I led my hunters and new members of the tribe into the forest. 
The cool wet grass felt good on my feet from the warm sand, but I could feel the dirt collecting on my foot. We walked into the forest, the branches grabbing at my foot and arms. As I led my tribe I thought, once again I Jack Merridew got what I wanted. When my group and I went over a couple of pig rocks and we were at our camp site. Castle Rock.  We all gather round and I order round. " Everyone, Do the dance, our hunting dance." We gathered around and started to dance, we acted out all our killings, we chanted and sang. Giggled and screamed. As we danced around I saw a dark shadow come out of the forest. It was raining and dark. Everyone fallowed my eyes and I yelled out "CHARGE!" 
We all ran down to the beach were the beast was running. As we ran in the sand our feet kicked up sand which landed in our faces. The beast was coming closer, we all yelled out in a delirious way Ahhhhh!!!! I looked up and could see a corpulent shape. I thought it was my imagination.
The beast was talking I could here it. Talking about a dead man on the hill, but I was to scared to focus on what the beast was saying. We caught up with the beast and stabbed it. Ripping his skin apart. It cried and moved ferociously. It yelled out screaming and crying " Dead man, Dead man on hill!" We rip the  bloody flesh with our teeth and our spears. We don't stop from fear. We all chant "Kill the beast, Bash him in , Spill his blood!" We repeated over and over again. 
"Kill the beast, Bash him in, Spill his blood. I stabbed him with my pointed spear and struck it into the beasts body, As I pulled it out its flesh tore sticking to the stick and them flapping down. I took my stick out of his bloody body and blood dripped. The beast crawled out of the circle and flopped to the side and with all strength left he made the right choice of finally dying. We stared at the beast and looked away at a job well done as the ocean dragged him in. With a kill of the beast done I order the camp to sleep. I walk up some hills with my troops and find a splotch of grass and lay under the stars for a tomorrow I have plans. I look at the dark sky and my heart beats fast, my eyes struggle to stay open. I could see the purged sky that was covered with fear. I took a breath and blew out and fell asleep. 
I wake up with the sun shinning as bright as it could in my face. The sun was a long piece of phosphorescence. I lift my arm over my eyes to block the sun. I get up and boys still sleep. I stretch my arms and yawn. Something came over. Some kind of anger, and I wanted it gone. I felt barmy, but I knew that it wasn't true. I just had anger bottled up inside. I grabbed Maurice and Roger and Wilfred. I pointed at Wilfred. "Tie him up!" Wilfred was frightened, didn't know what was going on. They tied him up and I gave Roger the honor of whipping him. 
"SMACK!" The sound of the first whip was fierce. The front of the vine hit first and from there the rest. Like a snake moving through thick tall grass. Its head moves first and then the rest slithers along. We whipped Wilfred again again. He whimpered and whined. We whipped him and his back slithered. We sent quivers down his back. We cut the vines and he crawled away. While us older boys laughed at his pain.  We hunted the day and messed around. Took a day off from hunting. 
It reached dawn and the sun was setting, and then it hit me. We needed fire so I gathered the hunters and I planned. " Hunters gather round." I told them the plan, we waited a while till the wimps were asleep, and we sneaked into the forest. It was dark and cold branches came up out of no where grabbing me. We reached the huts and I looked at the boys and nodded. They new the plan and the boys whispered " Come out Piggy, We want you. We could here whispers inside the hut as we tapped on their shelter. We started to ambush. We attacked there shelters and pushed their hut down. 
I reached for Piggy and grabbed his glasses.
" I got em', I got em'!" We ran into the forest out of sight. We ran to our camp sight a took a breather. We rested in the grass and gazed at the glasses waiting for the sun tomorrow to come. I gazed at the glasses as every one fell asleep and so not much later my eyes we tired and I was to weak to move. So I stretched and yawned, turned to my side and closed my eyes.